Still working on my lineup. I more or less started over after watching Ryan Lang's character method and realized I should be a little more clean and deliberate. Refined my linework and chose color flats after struggling with the greyscale rendering (last image). I'm having trouble getting my darks/lights/midtones to play nicely when using curves to add lighting. My second image illustrates the direction I would like to apply in the coming week. See y'all in the morning!