Hi! I'm working hard on my final. I'd love any feedback I can get on these characters.
Here's my new revised version. I've also included the character inventory and previous sketches to show my thought process on getting here. My goal is to have these look like believable characters for a Laika film.
The story I've figured out so far is simple. Fish kid gets "adopted" by a weathered fisherman and his neice (who is a diver and boat mechanic) on their fishing boat. Fish kid has never been above the surface of the water. He is clumsy in his efforts to adapt and causes a lot of trouble for the people around him.